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L is for life, L is for cookie

Wed Dec 10, 2008, 5:24 PM
  • Mood: Thrilled
  • Listening to: bleeding love
  • Reading: N/A
  • Watching: comedy
  • Playing: N/A
  • Eating: oranges
  • Drinking: lemonade
Hey guys, this is a rough draft of my presentation, I was wondering if I could get criticism please and please tell if you get the meaning of this poem too. And maybe suggest a better title...and maybe I'll find a way to rhyme this...
thanks


L is for Life, L is for Cookie
By: Me! (of course haha)

Life is a chocolate chip cookie
It tastes sweet when whole and a little empty when a bit is missing.
All those flour, sugar, baking, and time into it,
All those dreams, hopes, and aspirations built it.

Every bite you take a little bit
Is forgotten or thrown away.
Every chocolate chip eaten
Is a value taken or you emptily say.

As time goes on, that cookie
Is bitten and taken from
Bit by bit, chunk by chunk.
It is easier to eat no?

But even if you think you have finished your cookie
You can never get rid of those crumbs of yours
Do you remember?
What those cookies and chocolate chips taste like?

Then why don’t you make some more?
If you can’t make you old cookies
Or you don’t want you old ones anymore
How about a new batch?

The chocolate chip can stay of course,
Or how about some more?

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:iconholicia:
oh thanks for the watch! I didn't see XD

btw (i'm anime illiterate sorry) but where is Tsubasa from?
and since u just joined yesterday welcome to dA! look around enjoy!

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Tsubasa? The anime Tsubasa Reservoir chronicles is some journey between different wolds. I like that, so I can see lots of different things rather than just the same setting. You should see it someday, but I perfer the manga better. :iconimhappyplz:
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hey! i'm sorry to say...but have we met? but hi anyway!

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:iconerii-ous:
yes. Maybe...I don't know, but I do remember.
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lol

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okay fine, I reveal thee (but I don't really). But it's someone crazy from Sunday class.

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